Dream Deep

I'm sorry, but this is near impossible to read in this format. Just a tip: try to space out the dialogue and paragraphs a bit - it'll get you more ...

C'est moi! Salut, mon ami / le Diable! So I finally got to it. My list of crits was getting staggeringly long and I figured I owed you one long-overdue ...

*cannot refrain from laughing maniacally* I thought you gave this up, Knuckles! ^_^ I'll have to return when I've got a bit more substantial time and give you a real ...

Cal, thank you so much. So much. So very much. Did I mention how much. I have to say, no one's wondered yet if Livny's on crack, but you'll be ...

Thank you very much, Amelia. ^_^ I can only assume that 'rolling a bouncy ball down the stairs' being compared to writing is a good thing... So glad that you ...

Ah, you'd better - otherwise I might send Livny to annoy you after all. And with Saphirus stalking you and Livny getting you drunk, it would probably be much more ...

Heya Gyr - didn't think I could forget about the crazy bird, did you? ^_~ I've printed this out so that tonight I can go over it pen. Tomorrow, if ...

Well... you have got a penchant for the taboo, Till - but there's nothing wrong with that. Taboo isn't vile, after all, it's just forbidden. And a bit daring. As ...

Let me begin, Misty, by telling you that you've got a wonderful writing style. I tend to cram too many words into a piece, overflow it with length and convolution. ...

Notes on character and plot - as commanded. ;) As I've read all of your chapters, I'll give you the general rundown here, rather than the line-by-line. Action : - ...

I wrote this while I was in adoration, and I just heard the line "Your time is not my time, but my time is Yours." The poem escalated from there. ...

Sure thing, Till, I'll work on that for the next chapter - forgive the line-by-line, then, Chapter Two's crit shall be gloriously decked out in a confusing jumble of overall ...

Ah - well, now that you explain it , I understand better. ^_~ I think Anxiety would work nicely. (Sorry I missed the saliant nuance.)

I don't think you need the (I forgot the name) dot-dot-dots, you can either put nothing there, or use single periods. The dot-dot-dots make it seem more juvenile, less serious. ...

Merci beaucoup. ^_^ A pleasure, of course - I'm glad you enjoyed it, Horizon.